know question of all =) : Can you read my book report and tell me what it is? Thank you. its supposed to be one page long and it is. thanks!?
Paine Underwood always do the right thing. Even if he does it the wrong way. He knows that Muleman dust is the waste from his casino boat, the Coral Queen in the waters of the Florida Keys. Paine could not, and he sank the ship. He did not even deny it. He sat in a folding chair on the beach and looked at the Coral Queen sink below the contaminated water. It was not a well thought out plan. Dusty and his workers were business as usual within a few days. Dusty disposal of waste from toilets into the water every night, just to save money. People can not even swim in water because it is so filthy. Children are sick and because Dusty does not pay to have dumped waste properly. As Paine put in jail and refused to be saved, because he is such a condition, the only man to do something about her son, Noah Underwood is. Noah and his sister Abbey, will not allow dust to continue to do. You will develop a plan. A plan that could go wrong. A mistake they could to. And with Luno guard boat, never stopping, make sure Dusty kept under lock’s plan, it seems almost impossible. But with help from a female employee, Shelly, you are only allowed to work. Noah and Abbey sneak into the boat with a large amount of food color fuchsia. They sneak into the bathroom and wash your food coloring downward. She almost had it almost without a scratch. Luno and Dusty find and hunt them. They start a dirty and try to escape. Like they think it is over, Bobby was their grandfather, whom she believed to be dead to save her. He is old, but he sure knows how to punch. Abbey and Noah got way and trying to escape after many hours, dying their boat. A storm hits. Nothing seems to go right. They are waiting for the storm, and finally rescued by her parents and grandfather. Her father was able to escape from prison and the guards were relieved to get rid of him. Everything had to do what he had to pay for the damage. Noah called the Coast Guard and told them what Dusty did, and asked them to Thunder Beach. When Noah and his family got there, the water was a light purple. The plan had succeeded. Dusty had gone to jail, and the world was right again best answer.
reply from Mrs H. future
Do not forget to double space after periods in an essay! Paine Underwood always do the right thing, even though he is the wrong way. A sentence can not be two! A plan goes horribly wrong one fragment you place a semicolon in front of the sentence. Are you saying that you prepare a plan, a plan that could go wrong. He sat in a folding chair on the beach and looked at the Coral Queen sink below the contaminated water. Comma splice comma dropping or adding a “he” beobachtet.Statt infront “And with Luno watch over the boat ,….’ Say: “With Luno watch over the boat will stop at nothing to ensure Dusty’s plan is under wraps practice (a word or two?) You can also try to get rid of any” be “verbs (is, am) was. Through your essay free of those words that makes your words stärker.Ich ‘m reading it again to catch the rest! I saw this the first time! Give me a few minutes! More! Dusty disposal of waste from toilets into the water every night, just to save money. ~ ~ This sentence does not need the comma can not break contractions in writing – in fact you are building a contraction! Anyway, it can not! Children are sick and because Dusty does not pay to haben.nehmen waste is properly disposed of the left “and” because it (no comma). As Paine put in jail and refused to be rescued because he is such a condition, the only man to do something about her son, Noah Underwood ist.Es is too much information in this record. You can check Neuformulierung.Noah and his sister Abbey, will not let you do the dust weiter.Sie accidentally misspelled Dusty in this set! Oops! SECURE stay in the same tense! If you write about literature, every event in Gegenwart.Lesen this aloud to you. It will help you say it flow leichter.Auch that you’ve never read the story before. It confuses me when you’re talking about sinking the Coral Queen Paine and then with Dusty its operations back to normal, and then go back to what makes pollution to people. Paine go to jail just magically appear. How did he get caught? Just for the record I’m not saying this is bad! I am overloading you with information! I could say more, let me know if you need further assistance.
~ Jenn
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